In my essay I want to focus on word tense and the use of double negatives. I often use phrases such as, “It is not uncommon for…” instead of, “It is common for…”. I would like to fix these so that everything is clear and flows well. These wordy sentences, as mentioned in Little Seagull, make your point less clear and your essay harder to follow.

I believe that all of my MLA citation is correct. I checked with the Little Seagull and my peer reviewers said they look good!